She wore a Pink Kurti, Blue leggings & a creamy crepe bandage hiding the tender green nerves on her left foot. Her luminous eyes filled colors in the hall, they spoke when her lips rested, her feathery eyelashes danced to meet each other. Each time she faced the light, the little diamond shone on her nose-tug. Her dark red pasted lips showed their presence whenever she spoke with an unrestrained enthusiasm; they justified their superpower of distracting a man's attention with such ease. Her overly-glittery teeth lightened up the ambience & made the numbers visible in the coffee bill.
She parted her silky hair from the right side; a wisp of it took a juicy turn shadowing her forehead & ending up behind the left earlobe. She played with it constantly. As she ran her fingers through her hair making the soft waves, my heart broke into pieces & followed the waves.
I lived watching those moments, all of that beautified her face, all that I did was 'Pointless Smiling'.
She lived, I smiled
I loved, She smiled.
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We then bursted with a 'POINTLESS SMILE' again.

Super maccha.. Saale meri sunn tu ek novel likh.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhai, Long way to go for a Novel.
DeleteHa ha .good old memories.. Good one brother ;)
ReplyDeleteThank You Arun. Understood your 'HA Ha'.
DeleteHa ha .good old memories.. Good one brother ;)
ReplyDeleteOhhhhh myyy goddd...... Luk at dese beautiful & deeply writtn feelings........ (Y) simply spelbounding.....!!!! While reading dese magical lines, each word of it, anybody cn enter an imaginary world with crystal clear stuffs....... !!! Good job.... :) nw my wish to see a novel by 'Vijay' is increasin....... ;)
ReplyDeleteBatra Ji : Aapka Ashirvaad sada aisa hi rahe.
DeleteDude... Some credits... It's a nice write up though. :)
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OMG..!! VJ too good..Never knew bout this hidden talent of yours..Beautifully written :) Kudoss!!
ReplyDeleteGood luck..Hope to see more such writings in future.
Thanks So very much Soujanya.!!
ReplyDeleteToo good Vijay:) Very well written!! Looking forward to seeing more such write-ups in the future.Gud luck!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Uma Vkaranth.!
ReplyDeleteNicely written HB:) .. A visual narration of the story.
ReplyDeleteThanks so very much Brother!
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